Looking back at your
preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it
to the full product?
Looking back, I improved a lot. The final piece is far more
professional and less amateur. Starting with the cover, the image on the final
piece is in a much more suitable location, and the background is changed to
make it look more subtle and eye pleasing. The masthead is a lot more readable,
and in a more suitable font. There are more cover lines to fill up dead space,
less colours are used, more editing has been done to make it look more eye
catching, there’s an obvious theme through the fonts and background image, and there’s
a better sense of uniformity in the masthead on the cover and the contents.
Secondly, the contents page I feel improved even more. In
the final piece there isn’t a wall of text that is present in the preliminary
task, and the text isn’t hyphenated. Where I did edit the image to make the
text more readable in the preliminary task, it was done very carelessly and was
the exact same shape and size as the cover image, making it very aesthetically dull.
The layout if the text, and the way that there are no changes in font or size
make it very difficult to read. More colours are introduced, making it feel
very juvenile, and the same font is used throughout both pieces. In my final
piece, I feel I not only conquered all of these problems, and came out with
something professional, but I also managed to slightly challenge certain normal
conventions, and using the ones that worked best with the feel of the magazine.
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